i love dragons, by trae lower.

Dreams of Red

wrapped in silence
a ghost waits in tow

beyond, pillars of marble fence
a field covered in snow

encircled by Lourdes
a poet starves to go

with secrets of an oracle
a plan with-holds to show

while darkness befalls there
a craving comes to know

yet the joyous surroundings
a woman keeps in woe

have overthrown the power
a circle needs to grow

so for her will the risk is made
a piper pulls his bow

aiming in love straight for her heart
a miss first stabs her toe

and with that error the patrons cry
a feeling oh so low

but standing tall he tries again
a shot for the precious doe

that in good time fairness will find
a dragon that will row

across the sea and lovely fox
a refreshment of flow!

velvet I site

i think this title might need some work their cheif. and don't be so tough on whatever woman you're writing of, you know she's probably the most amazing thang on the planet.

Dreams of Red

velvet I site wrote:

i think this title might need some work their cheif. and don't be so tough on whatever woman you're writing of, you know she's probably the most amazing thang on the planet.

ya know, man... butt out eh. my girl knows the sky is up and the sea is deep, and that sun's angled light makes em both blue... and she knows too that she asks for the public rough-housing that has been given to fly around here... so go take some pictures or something you lazy bum.

sistanumsy

I appreciate the fact you know how to write something so complicated to know how to read.;)

Dreams of Red

sistanumsy wrote:

I appreciate the fact you know how to write something so complicated to know how to read.;)

thanks. i surely would read alot more if i had the "free-time", whatever that means...?

velvet I site

Dreams of Red wrote:

thanks. i surely would read alot more if i had the "free-time", whatever that means...?

don't let him fool you, he's still trying to figure out "Green-Eggs and Ham."

Dreams of Red

velvet I site wrote:

don't let him fool you, he's still trying to figure out "Green-Eggs and Ham."

yeah, as if you have any "Ideas" as to what that Mark Twain guy was talking about! such buffoonery!

sistanumsy

I barely get time to read let alone write. You two sound like you are acquainted? Don't worry velvet I've been fooled before, I'm still alive.

trinityeliza

sistanumsy wrote:

I barely get time to read let alone write. You two sound like you are acquainted? Don't worry velvet I've been fooled before, I'm still alive.

i think one in the same is more accurate,...

always leavin' here confusion.

~dee

sistanumsy

?????????? Was only commenting on the piece.

Dreams of Red

trinityeliza wrote:

i think one in the same is more accurate,...

always leavin' here confusion.

~dee

what can i say...?

velvet I site

Dreams of Red wrote:

what can i say...?

schizophenomenology is fun...?

Dreams of Red

sistanumsy wrote:

?????????? Was only commenting on the piece.

yeah i wasnt tryin to insult you Sista... just spinnin' some fun with some friends... your comment was totally valid and much appreciated...

sistanumsy

Seeing only the poem, but decided to investigate in an after thought. Not so well used to it around here I guess. Have fun.

Dreams of Red

sistanumsy wrote:

Seeing only the poem, but decided to investigate in an after thought. Not so well used to it around here I guess. Have fun.

well i'm always trying to have fun... but i really appreciate your participation.. sorry about the confusion before... i think i scared everyone else away from my posts... but then i guess that's okay... this damn new-fangled technology sometimes gets in the way of what i really want in life....

Dreams of Red

trinityeliza wrote:

i think one in the same is more accurate,...

always leavin' here confusion.

~dee

perhaps the understatement of the century?

i suppose that isnt much of an accomplishment, being only 5 years in,... but certainly confusion whirs all around this circumstance.

sistanumsy

Try and make it work to your advantage and it bites you? Well I find it nice to be able to get it out. Something new-fangled too. Sometimes you gotta weed out the garden. K

velvet I site

sistanumsy wrote:

Try and make it work to your advantage and it bites you? Well I find it nice to be able to get it out. Something new-fangled too. Sometimes you gotta weed out the garden. K

wisdom without compromise, i not only respect that but it refreshes me, and thats what i crave more than anything... even if one fails 99% of the time in striving to accomplish such effects. with all sincerity, thank you Sis.

Dreams of Red

velvet I site wrote:

wisdom without compromise, i not only respect that but it refreshes me, and thats what i crave more than anything... even if one fails 99% of the time in striving to accomplish such effects. with all sincerity, thank you Sis.

more than anything?--what a fucking crock!

we all know who you crave more than anything, so quit the lies jackass.