The Redemption Dance

Dreams of Red

i made it to the ocean this week and it uplifted me a great deal... this one was written next to the sea........





Skylight fulfills the backdrop of every ancient occasion;
The ballroom it is for the dancing and labors of spiritual tides.

Music provides the landscape, touching the deepest recesses of the soul;
There is no recourse, Experience succumbs to the power of Time.

All triumphs are devoured through-out history's progression into pinnacles of perception,
But everything is redeemed upon the enlightenment of society's eternal curse.

Therefore mortality sings, "Behold!--The fleeting world so Beautiful!";
And, "Time, you devilish sphynx, your trickeries are stronger than me, Death!"

So sounds the division-bell between knowledge and memory,
Marking at once a stampede through the doorway into Nature's infinitude.

The agendas of status fail eventually, and their agents too perish beneath the hands of their own misconstructions;
Humanity is the invaluable aim, for the cosmos can no more understand itself than can flowers bridge an ocean.

Likewise did Hannibal traverse the Alps: by emplying the stature of elephants!;
Thus stamping growth onto the immortal tale of Earth's epochal lifespan.

'Evolution' is the name of our waltz, and where compliance is made, there Universal-thunders forge earthquakes of 'Renaissance';
The process is creativity, describable only as a raining hurricane of Dionysian-Bacchanal against the stagnations of institutional fertilization.

Below, in Culture's fields of azure-green,
The joy of existence resumes always as the fundamental truth by which Justice abides.

sistanumsy

with familiarity.:):)

Dreams of Red

sistanumsy wrote:

with familiarity.:):)

thanks.. but i aint gettin any younger....




.....or am i...?

sistanumsy

At Heart????

Being Enlightened

Very, very good, Dreams of Red!!! I enjoyed the whole piece but this part really stood out:

"The agendas of status fail eventually, and their agents too perish beneath the hands of their own misconstructions;
Humanity is the invaluable aim, for the cosmos can no more understand itself than can flowers bridge an ocean.

Likewise did Hannibal traverse the Alps: by emplying the stature of elephants!;
Thus stamping growth onto the immortal tale of Earth's epochal lifespan."

--I just love it!

justam

This sounds good to me.

Dreams of Red

Being Enlightened wrote:

Very, very good, Dreams of Red!!! I enjoyed the whole piece but this part really stood out:

"The agendas of status fail eventually, and their agents too perish beneath the hands of their own misconstructions;
Humanity is the invaluable aim, for the cosmos can no more understand itself than can flowers bridge an ocean.

Likewise did Hannibal traverse the Alps: by emplying the stature of elephants!;
Thus stamping growth onto the immortal tale of Earth's epochal lifespan."

--I just love it!

thanks much!... i kind of like the flow of those 2 stanzas myself... nice eye(s)

Dreams of Red

justam wrote:

This sounds good to me.

thanks... up until now i was almost feeling completely deaf. no really, sometimes i think i hear the opposite of what sounds are really being made... it's kind of a beyond good and evil problem i have... but thanks again for the feedback J... tis greatly appreciated.

justam

Dreams of Red wrote:

thanks... up until now i was almost feeling completely deaf. no really, sometimes i think i hear the opposite of what sounds are really being made... it's kind of a beyond good and evil problem i have... but thanks again for the feedback J... tis greatly appreciated.

You're welcome.