Realizing Red

Dreams of RedDreams of Red Posts: 203
edited January 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
here's one i wrote a-while back, scratching, etching, and clawing with tact--



your words make me presume
perhaps you have assumed--

an ignorance amiss
in my sacred bliss

for two souls alive
who perchanced to dive

whence we Naturally knew
I am Cleopatra, like you

and you, a Caesar as me--
thus for us to be free

we must become We
a-washed in Trinity!


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still doesn't feel wholly complete,...
like something is missing,...
something beyond words,...
something hissing,...
and caressing my feet,...
with the dangers of eternal love,...
which must be over-come.
i'm a thief... and a liar...

see Ed's church?--he's breathing fire.....
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  • this is well written and a very intense piece that makes one think,... did u write this yourself????
    Put me in coach...I'm ready to
    Fuck up...the USA...
    Look at me...I can rig...
    The presidency!!!!
  • this is well written and a very intense piece that makes one think,... did u write this yourself????


    you know i did,... and you know too why i did.

    i just can't contain my passion any Longer, so perhaps you are due to suffer my desire.... In the Arms of Sleep.
    i'm a thief... and a liar...

    see Ed's church?--he's breathing fire.....
  • Now U R Going To Sleep On Me,... Tis The End...???

    I Shall Go Now.
    Put me in coach...I'm ready to
    Fuck up...the USA...
    Look at me...I can rig...
    The presidency!!!!
  • Now U R Going To Sleep On Me,... Tis The End...???

    I Shall Go Now.


    no, tis one of my favorite Pumpkins songs,... and truy beautiful in every sensation of music.

    go if you must, but in my heart you will remain.
    i'm a thief... and a liar...

    see Ed's church?--he's breathing fire.....
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