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Dreams of RedDreams of Red Posts: 203
edited January 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
i wrote a poem
about my one
i did it just now
but lost it in time
the electric cow
ate my words
and when i went to see
she'd ate the last
so now it's gone
thoughts never seen
of how i love
earth's Beauty queen
although she says
i must sit and wait
i hardly think
that that's my fate
for she'll have to see
the pain i'm in
eats through my soul
of Seraphim
and though it's true
she owns my heart
my faith is Fun
until we start
so call me dear
or find me true
cause living here
without you
makes me twitch
and breaks me too
because i long
alone and bored
to see your smile
and caress your fjord
all through the night
all down that nile
holding true
your heart in me
my love is you
sweet Li...
i'm a thief... and a liar...

see Ed's church?--he's breathing fire.....
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  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    So is that sweet lies or sweet Lizzy?
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  • Dreams of RedDreams of Red Posts: 203
    justam wrote:
    So is that sweet lies or sweet Lizzy?
    hmmm.. i never thought of that before.

    either way, seems as though the air just keeps getting thinner... ya know?
    i'm a thief... and a liar...

    see Ed's church?--he's breathing fire.....
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    Dreams of Red wrote:
    hmmm.. i never thought of that before.

    either way, seems as though the air just keeps getting thinner... ya know?

    LOL!!

    :D

    You mean we're all getting light-headed?
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  • velvet I sitevelvet I site Posts: 192
    justam wrote:
    LOL!!

    :D

    You mean we're all getting light-headed?

    haha.. that's great..!

    i can't really say about anyone else, but i'm not sure mine can get any brighter... ;)
    change begins with discontent.
  • Dreams of RedDreams of Red Posts: 203
    velvet I site wrote:
    haha.. that's great..!

    i can't really say about anyone else, but i'm not sure mine can get any brighter... ;)

    wait, what's going on here?
    i'm a thief... and a liar...

    see Ed's church?--he's breathing fire.....
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    Dreams of Red wrote:
    wait, what's going on here?

    I haven't any idea. Clueless Anne Marie, that's me. :D
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  • velvet I sitevelvet I site Posts: 192
    Dreams of Red wrote:
    wait, what's going on here?
    go back to sleep dufus, it's obvious no one cares what you think.
    change begins with discontent.
  • Dreams of RedDreams of Red Posts: 203
    justam wrote:
    I haven't any idea. Clueless Anne Marie, that's me. :D
    well no worries, that punk is always trying to make me look bad.. it's clear you have a good heart, so thats all that matters really.. :D
    i'm a thief... and a liar...

    see Ed's church?--he's breathing fire.....
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    velvet I site wrote:
    go back to sleep dufus, it's obvious no one cares what you think.

    What?! I like reading the poems!
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  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    Dreams of Red wrote:
    well no worries, that punk is always trying to make me look bad.. it's clear you have a good heart, so thats all that matters really.. :D

    Okay. Thanks. :)
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  • Dreams of RedDreams of Red Posts: 203
    justam wrote:
    What?! I like reading the poems!

    thanks Just! i know i havent even begun to reach the epic proportions necessary for true greatness.. but i'm working on it ;)
    i'm a thief... and a liar...

    see Ed's church?--he's breathing fire.....
  • trinityelizatrinityeliza Posts: 426
    sweetleaf????? where's my song????
    Put me in coach...I'm ready to
    Fuck up...the USA...
    Look at me...I can rig...
    The presidency!!!!
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