In the Land of the Blind the One-Eyed Man is Strung Up as a Heretic

Ian MIan M Posts: 123
edited December 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Five new poems:

poised.are.the.elements.
'.it.'.isn't.nice.'.is.a.valid.criticism.
elbows.chin.on.a.lampless.table.
so.many.books.to.read.
there.were.smart.people.in.the.Dark.Ages.
I.like.a.cold.blanket.after.my.holiday.
John.and.Sarah.remember.childrens.television.programmes.fondly.
the.deserts.are.drying.up.



a splinter, a task to be found in every pinch of skin.
it's winter, but they've awarded mister Celsius
ten quiet honorary degrees over and above the season's din.
cheek against cheek firm in farewell, grace
in contour and curvature almost too snug
a fit to my momentary embrace
and my own slimline taper.
away with my fleeting visions!
no sweetness must be tasted
for knowledge of Adam's decay.
wrenching a twist of loosened branch
was the bane of this man's hands
nails have once more to puncture the healed-over skin
to pry open old wooden quarries before they are forgotten:
abandoned to post-historic emergency.
the weathers around here grow increasing heterogeny
and that girl still holds my maddening sway.



It came to me when reading 'The Hunter and the Whale':

since all words can now be taken, held, twisted in the hand, divorced from any uttering breath, scrutinised as separate entities in their own special right
then the best words are those that turn back on themselves in mid flow,
sentences that stumble or pirouette or commit hara-kiri to return to the nothingness from whence they were borne, thus leaving no contamination behind
on the page - in the air - in the listener



Self-destruction is not cool.
Nobody will deny that
At least not in a sober, peer-unreviewed environment
And yet it still happens:
A rot sets in, thriving on the raw undersides
Of poised mettle
But from what vacuum did the spores of this decay arise?
And what vehicle responsible for their transmission
From deadwood to dead wood?
People get warm of the degeneration of others;
Gives them role-models to look down on;
The image of a somehow purer reaction to circumstance;
While still they respire, despair, expire
In their shallow parody of health and sanity



care has worn her face out daily
like a favourite item of clothing.
she goes her way like a storefront window
seeing in everything a wearied reflection.
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Comments

  • justamjustam Posts: 21,412
    These are interesting. :)
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  • deadnotedeadnote Posts: 1,678
    awesome
    more
    set your laughter free

    dreamer in my dream

    we got the guns

    i love you,but im..............callin out.........callin out
  • Jeremy1012Jeremy1012 Posts: 7,170
    they are all really good, especially the second to last one. I'd like to read more.
    "I remember one night at Muzdalifa with nothing but the sky overhead, I lay awake amid sleeping Muslim brothers and I learned that pilgrims from every land — every colour, and class, and rank; high officials and the beggar alike — all snored in the same language"
  • Ian MIan M Posts: 123
    thanks!
    there are quite a few others I've posted before
    you just have to click on the 'pseudonym' above I think
    go crazy!
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