"what is this?"

love_boat_captain

crazy song no chorus no verses not much structure just insanity just wildness and screaming guitars is it too weird?


(screaming)AHHHHHHHHHh the INSANITY!!!!!!!!
OH the voices OH the NOISE!
EVIL and the devices it employs!
on edge, sweat dripping
clenched teeth, tightly gripping
slience wont visit this mind
quickly i open the window blinds
Oh the cars, the PEOPLE!
STOP STOP STOP!!!!!!!
AHHHHHHHHH AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH(wailing)
(guitar solo)
FEED ME PILLS SOMETHINGS WRONG THEY FEED ME PILLS
to calm the fears these diseases INSTILL!!!!
(whispers) i was born dead... i live dying... i will die alive

eden

love_boat_captain wrote:

crazy song no chorus no verses not much structure just insanity just wildness and screaming guitars is it too weird?


(screaming)AHHHHHHHHHh the INSANITY!!!!!!!!
OH the voices OH the NOISE!
EVIL and the devices it employs!
on edge, sweat dripping
clenched teeth, tightly gripping
slience wont visit this mind
quickly i open the window blinds
Oh the cars, the PEOPLE!
STOP STOP STOP!!!!!!!
AHHHHHHHHH AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH(wailing)
(guitar solo)
FEED ME PILLS SOMETHINGS WRONG THEY FEED ME PILLS
to calm the fears these diseases INSTILL!!!!
(whispers) i was born dead... i live dying... i will die alive

Its a great rock song but Im worried about you.
You live "nowhere" and your sig is "alone:..?
gosh, your making me so sad for you :(

love_boat_captain

yea i try not to make people feel sad for me then i feel selfish and self centered and just annoying and stupidbut somehow i end up doing it anyways and then i dunno theres a lyric in thaqt blind melon song no rain i think i forget but its something like i just want someone to say ill be there when you wait or something i dunno im talking out my ass i do that alot see im rambling hmm this is going in a bad direction well um ok im gonna shutup now hehe sorry

eden

love_boat_captain wrote:

yea i try not to make people feel sad for me then i feel selfish and self centered and just annoying and stupidbut somehow i end up doing it anyways and then i dunno theres a lyric in thaqt blind melon song no rain i think i forget but its something like i just want someone to say ill be there when you wait or something i dunno im talking out my ass i do that alot see im rambling hmm this is going in a bad direction well um ok im gonna shutup now hehe sorry

Stop it, take 3 deep breaths and try to let go of the fear that you are letting others see your soul. Youre a beautiful man/ woman and need to learn to embrace the lovely soul that you are... screw anyone who doesnt like you or your art.

love_boat_captain

thanks for that the man/woman part gave me a little laugh im male btw hehe

eden

love_boat_captain wrote:

thanks for that the man/woman part gave me a little laugh im male btw hehe

Well you never know around here...theres no sex tabs so I always play it safe now.

love_boat_captain

very true very true

Being Enlightened

YYYEEEEAAAAHHHH!!! Love the wildness and insanity! It really works! I'm with ya on the "something's wrong they feed me pills to calm the fears that these diseases instill"--ya know, they seem to have a little pill to "fix" everything these days, that is, if you don't mind the nausea, vomitting, unexplained vision loss, bleeding ulcers... :rolleyes: I thought that was a good comment on society. As well, I like that there's SCREAMING and whispering, that's always been something I like in a song--ripping it up and then, toning it down. Good schtuff, love_boat_captain!