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A fleeting moment

trpptrpp Posts: 4
edited February 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
I have searched for so long but,
no answer have I found.
The vale of tears run down my cheek
to softly hit the ground.
The door it opens and,
now I see your face.
Bringing back the memories
I thought I had replaced.
For a fleeting moment you stop
before you pass me by.
"Is everything alright?
For what do you cry?"
"You" is what I think but,
not the words I speak.
The emotions locked inside me
for some reason I choose to keep.
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Comments

  • Ms. HaikuMs. Haiku Posts: 7,265
    I liked the rhythm of this and the rhyming. If it was longer the rhyming and message may be tedious, but it is just right here. :-)
    There is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
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  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    "Are you alright?"
    Perhaps more than empty words
    Maybe an invitation to step into the light
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