Concrete

AadAad Posts: 6
edited February 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
My breath broken
Plant your token
Into my soul
I won't even tell

Concrete silence
Clear my guidance
And to hurt means love
Oh will you forgive me dear

In my daydream, my sunset bathed room
I'll wait and beg for grace
Keep my eyes shut, thinking of things
They might fall into place

My tears telling
My sigh spelling
All my needless fear
Don't wanna be possessed

Please don't worry
I'm not sorry
It's a selfish mood
I'm a living doll

In my daydream, my sunset bathed room
I'll wait and beg for grace
Keep my eyes shut, thinking of things
They might fall into place
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  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    you could expand this....I fell in love with it immediately....I wanted more.....can you make it longer?
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    I don't have a fuggin clue what time it is.....I look at teh clock it's 1.40.....fuggin shit!!!!! still I got to read this at 1.38am......worth teh wait//////is that good for your press?
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    you remind me of suede.....heheheheh....loverlly
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • AadAad Posts: 6
    ISN wrote:
    you could expand this....I fell in love with it immediately....I wanted more.....can you make it longer?


    I think I could make it longer, I think there is just everything said I had to say... I would only blow it up, you know?
  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    yeah....but I loved it....I love your wiseness by the way.....

    / disappointment
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
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