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poetic ramblings

7forest77forest7 Posts: 11
edited November 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Penetrating the lovely universe is a dream, a reality, a gift
Leaving behind loved ones never felt so hard, so easy

Seeing for the first time, Learning a continuous line...
Bringing myself to cry, Wishing her death was a lie...
Feeling emotion beyond emotion, this is what it is like at the ocean
Creating love out of pain.....instead of the drain of going insane
The sun is still shining, ever and ever the human whining

The truth is a mystery, that science will never conquer, never discover
The truth is all I strive for, even though I have lies buried beneath the skin of culture
Helping those who cannot help themselves, a goal, but what lies are in the way?
The stinging feeling of helplessness, of lost love, of an unwhole soul...

Foraging ahead through space and time, this is the earth's rhyme
It's reason
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  • twin2twin2 Posts: 894
    Interesting read.
  • Floyd ManzeraFloyd Manzera Posts: 82
    twin2 wrote:
    Interesting read.
    so you hated it.
    it's okay, thick skin is necessary to be an artist.
    go ahead and say you hate it. he won't mind.
    unless he is ultra sensitive and slaughters himself because of your opinion, then of course, you'd be responsible.
    Vice President of the Synchronicity Club.
  • elephantrunkelephantrunk Posts: 24
    Hmm, to the author, could you please rewrite that. I don't think you translated it properly. Fix it and I will reread it again, but you must fix it beause I already wasted ten minutes having someone try and read it to me.
    I only wanted to be somebody. So fucking bad I came unglued.
    Here we are now face to face and I'm fucking you.
  • kevinbeetlekevinbeetle Posts: 358
    you two are such dicks sometimes.
  • elephantrunkelephantrunk Posts: 24
    Fuck you, kevinbeetle is it?
    What does the poem say to you then . . .

    To me it says that he is anit-women and god-hating, but that's just me.
    I am awaiting the rewrited. It can't go anywhere but up, now can it.
    I only wanted to be somebody. So fucking bad I came unglued.
    Here we are now face to face and I'm fucking you.
  • tekno_junkietekno_junkie Posts: 87
    kevinbeetle wrote:
    you two are such dicks sometimes.


    LOL.......
    Nobody sits like this rock sits. You rock, rock. The rock just sits and is. You show us how to just sit here and that's what we need.
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    How could you think this was translated wrong? It's so well done! :D

    Sometimes it's funny how differently people see things.
    I love the way the words sound in this!
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  • twin1twin1 Posts: 902
    It takes all types of people to make the world go round. Some like nice stuff and others like hateful things to make them feel better. Daggers do little good to anyone...peace
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!
  • lovin kindlovin kind Posts: 268
    beautiful writing
    thanks to everyone who can read what i write without having to say something mean
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