This is a poem i've made, my first try

Anna_falk
Anna_falk Posts: 114
edited February 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Not my ears, It's really my heart listening
catched feelings
tossed from far ago
It makes a difference
the future is forever colored in
brighter colors for everyone to see

everything makes a difference

I've got support from a stranger
To worry about tomorrow doesn't make it easier,
it only makes today worse.
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  • Ms. Haiku
    Ms. Haiku Washington DC Posts: 7,389
    Anna_falk wrote:
    Not my ears, It's really my heart listening
    catched feelings
    tossed from far ago
    It makes a difference
    the future is forever colored in
    brighter colors for everyone to see

    everything makes a difference

    I've got support from a stranger
    It's the first time I realized that a chance meeting or being in the right place at the right time is like the heart catching feelings. It's a physical sensation like blushing. Interesting poem, keep it coming :-)
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