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Anna_falkAnna_falk Posts: 114
edited June 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Observing faces
with different traces
life walking by life
on the pavement
going other places
leaving traces
in other faces
an observant
walks by

***

A treasure
an ever greatful finder
never tend letting go
keeping it close
to the heart
a true romance
for life
To worry about tomorrow doesn't make it easier,
it only makes today worse.
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  • Anna_falkAnna_falk Posts: 114
    tchaliz wrote:
    i love that idea!
    T
    Do you know the E.A.Poes story "the man in the crowd" or something close to it?

    Thanks for your answer Tchaliz, haven't heard of the story but it sounds interesting, I should look it up. :)
    To worry about tomorrow doesn't make it easier,
    it only makes today worse.
  • burtschipsburtschips Posts: 734
    yes I love the 'idea' too, because it is so true.

    'leaving traces
    in other faces'

    we leave traces in lots of ways, is it true (heard this) that an atom does not die? Something about atoms living on. Hmm sounds too odd to be actual but who knows.
    Salut baloo
  • NothingbetterNothingbetter Posts: 570
    The circle of life....you nailed it beautifully.

    We leave our footprints on others, and the face is such a telling palate.

    Very nice poem :)
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