my first poem
sabbath
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This was my first poem i wrote this 3 years ago, took me 2 months to finish it heh. It is about my bed, which represents safety and my escape from lonelyness and reality. Part of it is in my signature, so just ignore it. I was struggling, so i think there are some cliches. If so, please let me know because I would love to change them..
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Cope From Another -
Today, my bed mocks the Idle as I embrace wicked absense
mmm such a cannabis womb, ooh dyed yellow sheets;
I must dance with the Virgins 'cause they're in harmonic luster...
but still I'm thirsty for rocks, may you oat your buff?
an eden in carrot weighs like my inner wraith in wooden May.
Oh this day, plaque and lament due to someones laid litter
thus i'am lost in words that are steeper than before
And there I see The Mary 'neath her orchid lace,
so I dove over today's chanted piss, mmm Apollo's lips...
The pits above as the skies seduce and splay below.
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Cope From Another -
Today, my bed mocks the Idle as I embrace wicked absense
mmm such a cannabis womb, ooh dyed yellow sheets;
I must dance with the Virgins 'cause they're in harmonic luster...
but still I'm thirsty for rocks, may you oat your buff?
an eden in carrot weighs like my inner wraith in wooden May.
Oh this day, plaque and lament due to someones laid litter
thus i'am lost in words that are steeper than before
And there I see The Mary 'neath her orchid lace,
so I dove over today's chanted piss, mmm Apollo's lips...
The pits above as the skies seduce and splay below.
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