"Separate Ways"

lobb152lobb152 Posts: 193
Love the way
Your hair parts ways
Going in separate directions
Ending at the same place
Spiral staircase
Traveling down your back
Other drops down
Cascading waterfall
Upon your neck
Both creating
A perfect silhouette.
I am a nothing dreaming of something unknown.
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  • nothing borrowed about that title... ;)

    nice read. creates a nice, calming image.
    Come on pilgrim you know he loves you..

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  • I have a great mental picture of your poem
    It doesnt hurt.... when I bleed
    but memories...they eat me
    I've seen it all before,...
    bring it on cause I'm no victim.
    -Ghost
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