"Untitled"

lobb152lobb152 Posts: 193
Down the layne walking
With a pearl in hand
Counting the crows
Ten vs. nothing
Yielding to the sound
Blind men know the reason
Lyrics transcend this place
Spoken only to you
As a lover would
Caressing the feeling
With virgin eyes
Singles see themselves
Hand in hand holding
In this waking dream
Reality has risen
For the fort is falling
Solid timbers ablaze
Rhythm slowly bending
Out of sight out of mind
The sadness is smiling
Denying its state of being.
I am a nothing dreaming of something unknown.
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Comments

  • are you a fan of:

    alice in chains
    pearl jam
    counting crows
    blind melon?

    just wondering.


    cool poem :)
  • are you a fan of:

    alice in chains
    pearl jam
    counting crows
    blind melon?

    just wondering.


    cool poem :)


    i agree lol...cool poem...also reminded me of a line from a Live song..
    ...It's only after disaster that we can be resurrected...
    it's only after you've lost everything ...that you are free to do anything....(Fight Club)

    ... I'll ride the wave...where it takes me....
  • lobb152lobb152 Posts: 193
    and also the movie Waking Life and Singles
    I am a nothing dreaming of something unknown.
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