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"Would You"

lobb152lobb152 Posts: 193
edited May 2019 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
What he lost was felt to be irreplaceable
And the sadness followed him home
Unknown to all was the depth
The magnitude hidden in the dark
Self-realization of the unconscious
Anger and pity sang him to sleep
Overcast clouds turned green to gray
All of his experiences stiched together
With death and love, swept away
The pain was felt immediately
However no one came to aid
Under the moonlight he felt himself give
He did not scream for he accepted the gift
What happened here was not tragedy
But self-discovery, wrapped, in rust colored clay
Transitions of the mind slowly turning leaves
Consciousness spinning a memory
A new reality born from the quickening
Laughing at the wind, drifting with the breeze.
I am a nothing dreaming of something unknown.
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  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    I'm not sure I know what this means, but it seems like growth. :)
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  • BrainofdzBrainofdz Posts: 1,617
    Very nice
    "Stunned by my own reflection, It's looking back, sees me too clearly and I swore I'd never go there again, Not unlike a friend that politely drags you down,down,down"

    When you see me on the street, yell out "FAVO!!!"

    I've been to alot of Pearl Jam shows;So fucking what.
  • PerceptualPerceptual Posts: 200
    That was from the soul.
    "this one, anytime I say love if you wanna say love, uh, say it, and if you say it you might as well say it loud, and if you don't feel like sayin' it, don't say it, but if you feel it, certainly say it..."

    NOTE: Everything I write in the P,P&M section are intended to be songs, not poetry.
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