"The Man Who Refused to Die"

lobb152lobb152 Posts: 193
Born of this experience, dust and hope collide. Dreams were born, but were told they must fade with the light. Weighting heavily, he dropped them and walked away. Within the routine he lost them, and many years did stray. The rut started to resemble a tomb. Looking back at life, he noticed they were not lost but had taken root. A sorrow overtook him, he would not witness the bloom. Despair made the tears flow, his time was almost through. The waters cradled him and he felt released. When he opened his eyes, the sun and moon were gazing back. Without a word he had found his way out. The man who refused to die clutched onto the twilight. In the dusk you can see his sacrifice, outlined with sweat, reaping dreams.
I am a nothing dreaming of something unknown.
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Comments

  • whispering handswhispering hands Under your skin Posts: 13,527
    that was beautiful!! great work.. I look forward to reading more
  • electronblueelectronblue WPB Florida Posts: 3,460
    <3<3<3 ...~
    ********************************
    "Forgive every being,
    the bad feelings 
    it's just me"


  • korbykorby Posts: 298
    did u write that about me ?
    its ok
  • Bu2Bu2 Posts: 1,693
    sad, striking....

    VERY well done!
    Feels Good Inc.
  • gus stillsgus stills Posts: 366
    like it.
  • Gary CarterGary Carter Posts: 14,067
    thank u for writing for this, this is sortof my life right now and i hope day to get out of this tomb
    Ron: I just don't feel like going out tonight
    Sammi: Wanna just break up?

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