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a short short-story inspired by Yellow Ledbetter

UsmanIUsmanI Posts: 72
edited August 2007 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
This is a really short story I wrote about two years back, inspired by the great song yellow ledbetter. Tell me what you think.

http://www.sffworld.com/community/story/2456p0.html
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Comments

  • SunBeamsSunBeams Posts: 21
    Wow.
    Now that was...wow.
  • jammin1586jammin1586 Posts: 39
    hey Usman I liked that a lot
    Current Favorite PJ Studio Albums:
    1) Vitalogy
    2) Yield
    3) Ten
    4) No Code
    5) Riot Act
    6) Vs.
    7) Pearl Jam
    8) Binaural
  • [Deleted User][Deleted User] Posts: 0
    Great story. Good work.
  • UsmanIUsmanI Posts: 72
    thanks guys. I have to admit i kind of forgot I posted this, so I looked it up now, and I'm glad you guys enjoyed it. I had to resist the temptation to actually have "yellow ledbetter" playing in the bg.
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    stellar, that was. :)
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • PiCTuReKePTPiCTuReKePT Posts: 311
    really nice story :)
  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    looks like yellow ledbetter inspires all over!
  • #X.#X. Posts: 142
    That was so good, perfect for what is going on right now. I hope you are still writing, and should share with us. #X.
    "The Poet is a madman lost in adventure."
    -Paul Verlaine-

    "With me poetry has not been a purpose, but a passion."
    -Edgar Poe-
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