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HenkeHenke Posts: 34
edited September 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
No time for sorrow
Lifes too short
I would rather live than to loose all hope
Dont care 'bout money
Dont care 'bout fame
Live it like its just a big 'old game
Friends come and friends go
But the ones that stick is the ones who glow
Remember the moments of love and joy
Dont let noone treat you like a toy
This is what Ive learned, this is what I know
Someday soon I hope you'll feel the same
Smart is being able to see the obvious
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  • twin2twin2 Posts: 894
    Good one. I think along those lines as well.
  • HenkeHenke Posts: 34
    Thanks alot man, it's important to have a positive look on life =)
    Smart is being able to see the obvious
  • depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    I like it. great poem
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    Thats really nice...but in my life I find that some "friends" have nothing but negativity to give.Oh well.what can you do.....

    nice poems for the good friends though....:)like you:)
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • HenkeHenke Posts: 34
    Thanks for the great feedback, it means alot to me =)
    Smart is being able to see the obvious
  • pacifierpacifier Posts: 1,009
    hmm, it's like you read my mind. Well my mind on a good day. Wish we could think positive when we really need it the most. I really like your lines about friends. I've moved around so much that I have had plenty of friends come and go, but I still have the same best friend since primary school and a few others that glow too :)
  • HenkeHenke Posts: 34
    Thats the nice thing about poems, they can cheer you up when youre upset or having a bad time =) This is what I strive to accomplish when I write most of my poems.

    You should consider yourself a lucky man, I find it hard to keep in touch with old friends as the years go by. I feel bad about that.
    Smart is being able to see the obvious
  • pacifierpacifier Posts: 1,009
    Henke wrote:
    Thats the nice thing about poems, they can cheer you up when youre upset or having a bad time =) This is what I strive to accomplish when I write most of my poems.

    You should consider yourself a lucky man, I find it hard to keep in touch with old friends as the years go by. I feel bad about that.

    You're right, that's smart. Write it down when you're happy so that when you're sad you have proof that things can be better. cool.

    And yes I consider myself a lucky wo"man" . I don't have many friends, and I like it that way. I know a lot of nice people but only a few I trust and love enough to call friend.
  • HenkeHenke Posts: 34
    pacifier wrote:
    You're right, that's smart. Write it down when you're happy so that when you're sad you have proof that things can be better. cool.

    And yes I consider myself a lucky wo"man" . I don't have many friends, and I like it that way. I know a lot of nice people but only a few I trust and love enough to call friend.

    Oh, woman =) Sorry about that, my mistake. And I agree, a small circle of good friends you love and trust is much better than a huge group of acquaintances.
    Smart is being able to see the obvious
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