Secret place

Henke
Henke Posts: 34
edited November 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
No need for worry
Everything will turn out fine
Please do not hurry
Just take your time
Even though what happened is still blurry
You did not commit a crime
Outside its flurry
Now close your eyes
Open them, look to the skies
Imagine what therein lies
A world without lies
A place where you arise
A place with no despise
A place without cries
Now enjoy your life
Embrace your time
Youll get there soon enough
Smart is being able to see the obvious
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  • Righteous Jammer
    Righteous Jammer Posts: 509
    A poem of hope...Yeah I like it.....
    It doesnt hurt.... when I bleed
    but memories...they eat me
    I've seen it all before,...
    bring it on cause I'm no victim.
    -Ghost
  • twin2
    twin2 Posts: 894
    I really like this one.
  • eMMI
    eMMI Posts: 6,262
    this one is BEAUTIFUL. :)

    makes me happy and comfortable.
    it's hopeful. :)
    "Don't be faint-hearted, I have a solution! We shall go and commandeer some small craft, then drift at leisure until we happen upon another ideal place for our waterside supper with riparian entertainments."
  • Henke
    Henke Posts: 34
    Thanks alot. I am glad you like it :)
    Smart is being able to see the obvious
  • depopulationINC
    depopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    I hate hope/happiness

    JK, nice poem
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • Henke
    Henke Posts: 34
    I have a couple of cynical poems up my sleave too :) Maybe Ill post some of them one day.
    Smart is being able to see the obvious

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