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A despise

HenkeHenke Posts: 34
edited November 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
I cut myself, to learn pain
I watch pictures, where people are slain
I see flesh and blood
I see Dark clouds scud

Sickness all around
Everyone abound
People wither
I feel myself slither

Tried to learn love
Tried to accept whats above
Denied the possibility
I have no tranquility

I learnt frustration
Damage beyond restoration
My life is worthless
Completely without purpouse

To everyone I lied
Tried to commit suicide
Youll know the betrayal
Here I will never fail

Hell, here I come
Theres nothing I've ever won
Except only this ride
Now that I slide

I'm the one you all hate
I'm the one without fate
A life you despise
I'm the Student of life
Smart is being able to see the obvious
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  • depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    mmmm

    another shady mind on the board?

    dark giving into the struggle....I like it.
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • HenkeHenke Posts: 34
    tchaliz wrote:
    no one is neither that important nor that despisable!
    cool down Henke, you will find it' s harder than hate everyone,
    T

    That may be correct, but keep in mind its only a fictional poem :) Im not sure I know what its supposed to represent, but in some way, I think it is a pretty cool poem.

    Regarding the poem in general, I think its a bit silly. At least it could have been alot better, but I guess one could always take the time to make it better though.
    Smart is being able to see the obvious
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