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HenkeHenke Posts: 34
edited July 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
You shot me with a no,
I was left bleeding tears.
The next night I woke up dead,
but I felt alive as I walked in the quiet rain.
It washed the feeling away,
but the taste was still there.
A year later I found myself in a desert,
an emotional desert.
I was looking for a caravan, I was looking for
you.
Smart is being able to see the obvious
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  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    Where's that rain when you need it, eh, Henke? :) Damned dry, that emotional desert!!!!
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • Holey GhostHoley Ghost Posts: 744
    I'm sure an oasis in the horizon
    and is nto just a mirage
    but an image of a dream
    or so it seems in the desert heat
    as you find that soul
    you chance to meat
    Create Good Things........
    Graduate of the School for Sexual Gifted....magna cum loads
  • HenkeHenke Posts: 34
    I love rain, and I'm surrounded by it 90% of the year, just not in a philosophical way :p
    Smart is being able to see the obvious
  • Holey GhostHoley Ghost Posts: 744
    welcome to the Rain Forest the puddle said to the raindrop

    (typos fixed from above)

    I'm sure an oasis is in the horizon
    and is not just a mirage
    but an image of a dream
    or so it seems in the desert heat
    as you find that soul
    you chance to meet
    Create Good Things........
    Graduate of the School for Sexual Gifted....magna cum loads
  • JamalJamal Posts: 2,115
    great read, truly love both
    Surf little waves big... Charge big waves hard

    - Antwerp '06, Nijmegen '07, Werchter '07
  • HenkeHenke Posts: 34
    Thanks for the replies :)

    Lovely poem Holey
    Smart is being able to see the obvious
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