Queen of the night

On my back you head towards the black skies
Listen the bell's ringing appears
Under the guise of your blue eyes
An incurable wound bottled in tears

Oh leave me, all alone
I'll weep, all alone

When I'll be gone at the break of the dawn
The city lights will get out of sight
Will I still be here tomorrow
Will I feel the fear grow in your heart tonight

Oh tonight
You queenlike beauty rule the night
With an iron hand
But with farseighted mind
May thy eyes shed diamonds when you ride through thy land

Oh leave me all alone
I'm not worthy to be peace of your heart

Oh leave me, all alone
I'll weep, all alone

My mind's tangled up with mean lies
And I think, that I've been done
'cause you were never here
And I have never been gone

Oh leave me, all alone
I'll weep, all alone
How can I forget your tender smile
Moments that I have shared with you
Our hearts may break
But they're on their way
And there's nothing I can do
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Comments

  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    quite interesting

    I see that you are in Switzerland. Is English a second language? I'm curious because while some semantics might be a bit off, the result makes for some nicely complex lines.
  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    fuk that Pastor Nazi.....it's a good emotive peom.....which is very clear......and has evoked a couple of goosebumps on my arms!!!!
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • Hi Pasta

    Thx for your reply!

    You're right, my main language is swiss german ;)...
    I know, it doesn't seem to make sense at first... But I think, if you look closer there's a kind of sense... even if it's just an emotional kind of sense... And if I would translate it to my language it won't make any difference :)...

    If there's an orthographical or grammatical mistake, please tell me.

    oh, and if someone of you's interested in listening to it:
    http://www.lim.li/musik/Queen%20of%20the%20night.mp3

    i know my pronunciation is not very well, forgive me ;)
    How can I forget your tender smile
    Moments that I have shared with you
    Our hearts may break
    But they're on their way
    And there's nothing I can do
  • So much emotion in your poem. I could feel it in my heart. I had to reread it!
    It doesnt hurt.... when I bleed
    but memories...they eat me
    I've seen it all before,...
    bring it on cause I'm no victim.
    -Ghost
  • Thanks for your replies ISN and a poet... nice to know, that my written words were able to touch someone's heart
    How can I forget your tender smile
    Moments that I have shared with you
    Our hearts may break
    But they're on their way
    And there's nothing I can do
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