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Words never listenWords never listen Posts: 46
edited January 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Memories don’t disappear
Sometimes they hide
And won’t be found again

I’m always seeking after memories of you
But by and by it gets harder to find them

The picture breaks
As my life did when I left you

I wish you forgot me
But how can we forget

Whether time passes by or not
It can’t affect a finished life

I know I don’t know whether I’m right or wrong
Nor what my intentions are
You may listen or you may not
There’s no truth
There’s no me
There’s just you I adore
How can I forget your tender smile
Moments that I have shared with you
Our hearts may break
But they're on their way
And there's nothing I can do
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  • coleencoleen Posts: 938
    really beautiful and just wow!
  • Words never listenWords never listen Posts: 46
    thx. i guess that was the most positive reply i ever got :)
    How can I forget your tender smile
    Moments that I have shared with you
    Our hearts may break
    But they're on their way
    And there's nothing I can do
  • nailz100nailz100 Posts: 1,176
    That poem is heartfelt and inspired.....I like it
    Only with our eyes closed can we truly see
  • Words never listenWords never listen Posts: 46
    thx nailz`!

    does someone have an idea for a title?
    How can I forget your tender smile
    Moments that I have shared with you
    Our hearts may break
    But they're on their way
    And there's nothing I can do
  • nailz100nailz100 Posts: 1,176
    Maybe call it "What was lost"?
    Only with our eyes closed can we truly see
  • Words never listenWords never listen Posts: 46
    hmm, good idea, but i think it does not picture the whole poem...

    maybe i'm wrong :)
    How can I forget your tender smile
    Moments that I have shared with you
    Our hearts may break
    But they're on their way
    And there's nothing I can do
  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    You know, I really liked the line "The picture breaks" so, my suggestion is that, that could be the title. :) Or possibly, Just You. :)

    I liked that you touched on time not healing all, just making it easier to hide things away. That was cool. :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • Righteous JammerRighteous Jammer Posts: 509
    I like your poem very much..Thanks for sharing
    It doesnt hurt.... when I bleed
    but memories...they eat me
    I've seen it all before,...
    bring it on cause I'm no victim.
    -Ghost
  • Words never listenWords never listen Posts: 46
    Hey thx for your replies...

    i like the picture breaks as title. good explanation.

    this title convinced me :) nevertheless i'm still waiting for other suggestions... you never know ;)
    How can I forget your tender smile
    Moments that I have shared with you
    Our hearts may break
    But they're on their way
    And there's nothing I can do
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