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In Tears

demetriosdemetrios Posts: 92,619
edited November 2008 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Please, Please, Please ...
Give me another chance.
Please, Please, Please ...
To tell you, I love you!
Please, Please, Please ...
Just one more touch.
Please, Please, Please ...
Don't go on me!

First one I posted here & made up.
It's corny. D'oh! To many please please words.
But it comes from the heart. :(
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Comments

  • finnanniefinnannie Posts: 1,186
    that's great D. :) - that's the way they should be, straight from your heart&soul&mind.

    You should definitely start writing more here.
    Won't let the light escape from me.
    Won't let the darkness swallow me.
  • demetriosdemetrios Posts: 92,619
    finnannie wrote:
    that's great D. :) - that's the way they should be, straight from your heart&soul&mind.

    You should definitely start writing more here.

    Thanks! :)

    I will the next few day's!
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