Taking my chance

AicAic Posts: 9
edited February 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
She walks untroubled
yet troubled she is
She sends me a sign
but whats the meaning of it?

Her sweet feel fills my sences
Longing for her taste
her smile to consume.


Vacation vacated relation.
Left my life undone.
My mind screams out frustration
but still she runs... run and run...


Return to my life
return to nothing
a distant strife
she is trying to tell me something

oh, she can't forget
I should have known
i cry inside as she regrets
she ask me to leave but I don't


Vacation vacated relation.
Left my life undone.
My mind screams out frustration
but still she runs... run and run...


Second time this time
I refuse to give up!
walking out the long line
facing what may come
what will come..




Probably a bad poem, just needed to get some feelings out. Last year my girlfriend left me right after the winter vacation because she couldnt get over her ex boyfriend. A year after I have met this really sweet girl who I care alot for, but as I come home from winter holidays (exact same time as last year) she tells me that she can't be with me since she can't forget her ex boyfriend... Well this time I told her that I would wait and wait untill she may some day be ready, if that day will ever come. I aint giving up this time - lets se how it works out :) Cheers
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  • Probably one of the better poems i have seen on here lately. We all get hurt when trying to be with someone we love, I'm in a dilema as of right now with a girl i care for deeply.

    thanks you.
    there'll be time for laughin'
    there's no time to cry
    soon i will be leavin'
    look me in the eye
    no matter what's in front of me
    it's your face that i'll see
  • This poem described how I'm feelin right now...soo beautiful and yet soo sad
    It doesnt hurt.... when I bleed
    but memories...they eat me
    I've seen it all before,...
    bring it on cause I'm no victim.
    -Ghost
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