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one day

Your_endorphin_rushYour_endorphin_rush Posts: 69
edited April 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
1 day you will see me
when you close your eyes
and enough time has passed by
for you to clearly see

1 day I will be there
when you open your mind
and enough hurt has passed by
for you to forget who I was

1 day we will be holding hands
when we are layed to rest
and enough words have been spoken
for us to forget this 1 day.
This is the best I could come up with.
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Comments

  • Righteous JammerRighteous Jammer Posts: 509
    Soo simple with powerful words, but sadness follows
    It doesnt hurt.... when I bleed
    but memories...they eat me
    I've seen it all before,...
    bring it on cause I'm no victim.
    -Ghost
  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    ^ I agree with a poet.....simple but powerful....
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • oldermanolderman Posts: 1,765
    as i am an olderman, the expressions herein this forum often are very meaningful and this poem is certainly close to mine own.. thank you for sharing your blues
    Down the street you can hear her scream youre a disgrace
    As she slams the door in his drunken face
    And now he stands outside
    And all the neighbours start to gossip and drool
    He cries oh, girl you must be mad,
    What happened to the sweet love you and me had?
    Against the door he leans and starts a scene,
    And his tears fall and burn the garden green
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