Illumination Of Hope
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This started out as one main thought but formulated it into this..this is hard for me, as this is the first time i have let someone else peer upon writings of mine in a poetic form..constructive criticism, flames, etc. is accepted.
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Illumination Of Hope
So amazing it is..
feeling you could be
on top of the world..
and yet everything
can come crashing down
tragically in a heartbeat..
creating a rift between
reality and fantasy..
not sure what is really there..
the swarming thoughts
of unknowing..
where to go..
where to hide the troubles..
behind a mask?..
but others can see
behind the mask..
leaving you hopeless..
the emotions on the brink..
ready to breakout
at any given moment..
so one chooses to run..
run from this disaster created..
yet not making
that solution needed..
making the conflict
worse than ever before..
then..halted.
Standing there,
wondering what it is
that has frozen you
in your tracks..
the light illuminating brightly..
the light of hope..
bringing that optimism
back into full force..
being whole again..
with no worries..
that helping hand..
will always be there you know..
just keep your eyes open..
and keep hope alive..
for life can work in the most wonderous of ways...
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Illumination Of Hope
So amazing it is..
feeling you could be
on top of the world..
and yet everything
can come crashing down
tragically in a heartbeat..
creating a rift between
reality and fantasy..
not sure what is really there..
the swarming thoughts
of unknowing..
where to go..
where to hide the troubles..
behind a mask?..
but others can see
behind the mask..
leaving you hopeless..
the emotions on the brink..
ready to breakout
at any given moment..
so one chooses to run..
run from this disaster created..
yet not making
that solution needed..
making the conflict
worse than ever before..
then..halted.
Standing there,
wondering what it is
that has frozen you
in your tracks..
the light illuminating brightly..
the light of hope..
bringing that optimism
back into full force..
being whole again..
with no worries..
that helping hand..
will always be there you know..
just keep your eyes open..
and keep hope alive..
for life can work in the most wonderous of ways...
"Everyone wants to be the sun that lights up your life, but I'd rather be your moon so I can shine on you during your darkest hour when your sun's not around."
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