Immortal Bond

reachdown12reachdown12 Posts: 693
edited December 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
This fire emblazoned scorching its path
With the wildest of flames through the inside
Building its barricade from all exteriors
The heat escalating till the burns become a reminiscent scar

Upon the very vital object keeping it flowing at its ever existent pace
Whilst the suppression its force pushing through ever the more
Till its prey becomes blinded to such an extremity by the rage settled in
That the neighboring form infers its presence apprehensively

Yet as the inquisitions arise, the existence is non-weary
The fire once disseminated greatly, has dissipated into a wisp
As the prey observed the faint recollections of the present
It showed the non-vacant feel from the inside

The realization had dawned upon its lissome form
Of knowing that it had not been its own beat
But yet the one of another that had been claimed theirs
In the sealing of a treaty between the prey and another

And as time wore on, began to see the difference
One that was proven to be so incredibly inexplicable
It was a wonder more miraculous than once known before
The knowledge withheld in the implications of the mind
Deemed worthy to be called on as such a force

It brought a content feeling among it unknown for so long
A desire so strong built out of assurance and compassion
One couldn't decipher if it originated there or from assistance of another
Which it whether be, a true closeness and trust was built from that moment onward;
It was an undying composure that would live on as an immortal bond never to be ceased
"Everyone wants to be the sun that lights up your life, but I'd rather be your moon so I can shine on you during your darkest hour when your sun's not around."
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  • twin2twin2 Posts: 894
    I like this one too.
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    This fire emblazoned scorching its path
    With the wildest of flames through the inside
    Building its barricade from all exteriors
    The heat escalating till the burns become a reminiscent scar

    Upon the very vital object keeping it flowing at its ever existent pace
    Whilst the suppression its force pushing through ever the more
    Till its prey becomes blinded to such an extremity by the rage settled in
    That the neighboring form infers its presence apprehensively

    Yet as the inquisitions arise, the existence is non-weary
    The fire once disseminated greatly, has dissipated into a wisp
    As the prey observed the faint recollections of the present
    It showed the non-vacant feel from the inside

    The realization had dawned upon its lissome form
    Of knowing that it had not been its own beat
    But yet the one of another that had been claimed theirs
    In the sealing of a treaty between the prey and another

    And as time wore on, began to see the difference
    One that was proven to be so incredibly inexplicable
    It was a wonder more miraculous than once known before
    The knowledge withheld in the implications of the mind
    Deemed worthy to be called on as such a force

    It brought a content feeling among it unknown for so long
    A desire so strong built out of assurance and compassion
    One couldn't decipher if it originated there or from assistance of another
    Which it whether be, a true closeness and trust was built from that moment onward;
    It was an undying composure that would live on as an immortal bond never to be ceased
    Did you at least warm your hands by the fire?
    Interrrresting.
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
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