All Thats Ours

StinkfootStinkfoot Posts: 546
edited March 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Taste the skin underneath me, feel it tease me, shiver sweetly,
hope for hours, think of flowers, all thats ours.

In the mind of two people, spine is equal, young and peaceful,
endless showers, healing powers, all thats ours.

It seemed so simple. We are but fragile. We hold each others.......smile.

Fight to keep it together, ride the weather, last forever,
deep within us, builds our towers, all thats ours.

It seemed so simple. We are but fragile. We hold each others.......smile.
It seemed so simple. We are but fragile.

We hold each other.

We fuck each other.

We are each other.
"I get into a state of consciousness that I can't explain. It is about feeling and not thinking. I get positive chills and insight into things that I can't get to any other way. It is Healing of the Soul." - Mike McCready
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  • pearlmuttpearlmutt Posts: 392
    the use of the word "fuck" there was really powerful -- it was like a jolt to my nervous system.

    I had the same reaction listening to a song on the new iron and wine album -- I think the lyrics in one part suddenly say, "we were born to fuck each other"

    I had the same reaction reading this as I did listening to that
  • coleencoleen Posts: 938
    Stinkfoot wrote:
    Fight to keep it together, ride the weather, last forever,
    deep within us, builds our towers, all thats ours.

    It seemed so simple. We are but fragile. We hold each others.......smile.
    It seemed so simple. We are but fragile.

    for reasons i'm not able to verbalize, this section, i enjoy reading over and over. :)
  • StinkfootStinkfoot Posts: 546
    Wow guys....thank you ALL. (I'm not used to people actually commenting on my stuff!!)

    It's actually one of the nicest songs I've written. I wish I had the resources to put them all on here....I'll work on a way! If you want to know how it sounds...ask Senrock! she's got a copy of ALL my stuff.

    Thanks again :)
    "I get into a state of consciousness that I can't explain. It is about feeling and not thinking. I get positive chills and insight into things that I can't get to any other way. It is Healing of the Soul." - Mike McCready
  • StinkfootStinkfoot Posts: 546
    pearlmutt wrote:
    the use of the word "fuck" there was really powerful -- it was like a jolt to my nervous system.

    I had the same reaction listening to a song on the new iron and wine album -- I think the lyrics in one part suddenly say, "we were born to fuck each other"

    I had the same reaction reading this as I did listening to that

    the 'Fuck' isn't actually in the recorded version...it was something I would add to it live (although if it was ever re-recorded I would record it this way as I prefer it......and it's true!)
    "I get into a state of consciousness that I can't explain. It is about feeling and not thinking. I get positive chills and insight into things that I can't get to any other way. It is Healing of the Soul." - Mike McCready
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