wow... a two verser!!

dunkmandunkman Posts: 19,646
edited September 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
In a perfect situation we'd have a drink and smile
and sit in consultation for an hour and a while.
We'd look for hidden answers in a choice from 1 to 5
this elected sack of cancers, these figures we despise.
And whilst we sit in darkened fear our world still falls apart,
that sound you hear upon your ear is your mother’s breaking heart.

As we fight for rights suspended and live from day to day,
our minds and hopes need mended, so battered and afraid.
You eat the hand that feeds you on a diet made for two.
Jump in and solve the issue, c’mon... show us what you can do.
Its nice to be looked after, you make us all feel so wanted,
but you’ll hang from my fuckin rafter if you don’t get this mess sorted.
oh scary... 40000 morbidly obese christians wearing fanny packs invading europe is probably the least scariest thing since I watched an edited version of The Care Bears movie in an extremely brightly lit cinema.
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  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    tell it like it is!!!!!......this is a much-valued and needed contribution to the poetry forums.......and I for one am very nonplussed about the fact that it hasn't been said before.....and it's only being said now, but I still think it was very well said, and even if it was never said, we all knew anyway.......am I making sense?......I certainly hope not ;)
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • dunkmandunkman Posts: 19,646
    nae point in beating about the bush.... but if for a lesbian take off the first b in beating :o


    I has done me some poems which me ISN does like....I am quite literary in heaven.........sorry bad pun!
    oh scary... 40000 morbidly obese christians wearing fanny packs invading europe is probably the least scariest thing since I watched an edited version of The Care Bears movie in an extremely brightly lit cinema.
  • yeah well said, dunkman1974.
    Salut baloo
  • NothingbetterNothingbetter Wichita, KS Posts: 570
    The emotion and anger in it are sweet. Great post.
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