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What You've Done

Banana-RamaBanana-Rama Posts: 108
edited August 2008 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
don't know what inspired this one, but i like it...


I just wanted to get out for a little while
So, you opened up the door
I just wanted to see some trees
So, you showed me the forest
I just wanted to view some water
So, you let me swim in the ocean
I just wanted to have some air
So, you gave me the sky


Words cannot explain...
What you've done for me,
You'll probably never know.
Yes, my mind sometimes does tend to wander
But not very far from you
"If you should die before me, ask if you could bring a friend" - STP

"Frugality without creativity is deprivation." - Amy Dacyczyn

Proud Supporter of the CAROLINA HURRICANES. GO CANES GO!!!
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  • deadnotedeadnote Posts: 1,678
    beautiful
    set your laughter free

    dreamer in my dream

    we got the guns

    i love you,but im..............callin out.........callin out
  • Banana-RamaBanana-Rama Posts: 108
    deadnote wrote:
    beautiful

    Thank you very much...

    It is the favorite thing I have ever written.
    "If you should die before me, ask if you could bring a friend" - STP

    "Frugality without creativity is deprivation." - Amy Dacyczyn

    Proud Supporter of the CAROLINA HURRICANES. GO CANES GO!!!
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