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Meaningful Meaningless

Banana-RamaBanana-Rama Posts: 108
edited January 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Hey everybody, I've been a long time lurker and thought it would be fun to register and share my love of poetry/music and Pearl Jam with everybody. Here is a poem of mine that was Pearl Jam/REM inspired

"Meaningful Meaningless"

Useful as
houseplants
Socially unable
to adapt
Reminding me
Of those
Has-beens
You Know
What Now
Take down

Armageddon
Car Crash
Mainstream
Hijacked
Pandemonium
Cash Test
Black Out
Nightmares
Make Believe
House Wares

Jump Start
Take Down
Rotten Products
Thorn Crown
Snow Fall
Rain Drops
Pocket Watch
Time Flies
Having Fun
This is done
"If you should die before me, ask if you could bring a friend" - STP

"Frugality without creativity is deprivation." - Amy Dacyczyn

Proud Supporter of the CAROLINA HURRICANES. GO CANES GO!!!
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Comments

  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    welcome to the board! lurking loses it's appeal after awhile, doesn't it?

    this poem was a very interesting read...it's got a fun rhythm to it...it's very fun to read out loud!
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  • Banana-RamaBanana-Rama Posts: 108
    charles wrote:
    Kindest chaos,
    free at last,
    Jack in the box!

    - the firts lines of each strophe caught my attention and kind of joined by themselves, hope you don't mind my "re-assembling"- anyway, wellcome, i liked it very much.
    C

    Wow! You're right! I like that....I also just noticed that some of the other lines match up good too...like

    Socially Unable
    Mainstream
    Rotten Products

    Thanks for the comment :)
    "If you should die before me, ask if you could bring a friend" - STP

    "Frugality without creativity is deprivation." - Amy Dacyczyn

    Proud Supporter of the CAROLINA HURRICANES. GO CANES GO!!!
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