Gently (a love poem)
Banana-Rama
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This is a love poem I wrote. I'd love any feedback.
Dearest one, why do you weep?
I am here for you.
I am the one.
I will dismantle all of your uncontrolable needs.
Tragically met and interwound from within.
You are mine.
You are my only.
Dirty open wounds, heal with time, dissolve my sin.
Never forget our forging fires.
Wash them away.
Soft spoken hearts are often broke.
Standing there with crying urges of desire.
Looking down from above and below
Around and around.
Your side by my side.
Our glass houses are set in stone
Wet eyes are often blinded.
Watching life pass by.
Without anybody.
Twist your soul into open mindness.
Accept my gift and take my love
Nevermore pain.
Everlasting life.
I'd give you my life, but that is not enough.
Dearest one, why do you weep?
I am here for you.
I am the one.
I will dismantle all of your uncontrolable needs.
Tragically met and interwound from within.
You are mine.
You are my only.
Dirty open wounds, heal with time, dissolve my sin.
Never forget our forging fires.
Wash them away.
Soft spoken hearts are often broke.
Standing there with crying urges of desire.
Looking down from above and below
Around and around.
Your side by my side.
Our glass houses are set in stone
Wet eyes are often blinded.
Watching life pass by.
Without anybody.
Twist your soul into open mindness.
Accept my gift and take my love
Nevermore pain.
Everlasting life.
I'd give you my life, but that is not enough.
"If you should die before me, ask if you could bring a friend" - STP
"Frugality without creativity is deprivation." - Amy Dacyczyn
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"Frugality without creativity is deprivation." - Amy Dacyczyn
Proud Supporter of the CAROLINA HURRICANES. GO CANES GO!!!
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sweet thoughts.
itz packd w/lotz of gnawlegz.
i LIK it!
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
hi hony.
u r m<O> 1 ovakind.
dont b mad.
i love u!