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Redemption (a work in progress)

Bitter HandsBitter Hands Posts: 9
edited January 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Don't look up, the sky is falling,
Don't look down, demons are calling,
Close your mind and damn the youth,
Open your eyes and see the truth.

Constant reminders,
Of permanent dividers
Comets burn out, stars fade away,
Memories remain, dust off the clay.

I dont need another day to realise,
Just how much I have compromised,
To keep her quiet and pacified,
Until the day that her love died
"That'll do pig. That'll do...."


"I'm Troy McClure and I'll leave you with what we all came here to see - hardcore nudity!"
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  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    The first stanza is my favorite.
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  • Bitter HandsBitter Hands Posts: 9
    the first stanza and the final two lines of the second stanza have een around for a while. first time i put them in anything. thanks for your comment
    "That'll do pig. That'll do...."


    "I'm Troy McClure and I'll leave you with what we all came here to see - hardcore nudity!"
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