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Emma

Jeremy1012Jeremy1012 Posts: 7,170
edited January 2008 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Emma will not remember me,
and she will be perfect.
I will think of her
everytime I see the plum blossoms
falling.

So pretty
as her hair cascaded down
like frost, dusting the birch trunk,
down
to the root.

Emma will not remember me
and she will not miss
the times when I was there,
nor note the times
that I am not.
"I remember one night at Muzdalifa with nothing but the sky overhead, I lay awake amid sleeping Muslim brothers and I learned that pilgrims from every land — every colour, and class, and rank; high officials and the beggar alike — all snored in the same language"
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  • Jeremy1012Jeremy1012 Posts: 7,170
    some comments would be cool on this, positive or negative. I don't normally write stuff like this so I need to know whether I should again or not :p
    "I remember one night at Muzdalifa with nothing but the sky overhead, I lay awake amid sleeping Muslim brothers and I learned that pilgrims from every land — every colour, and class, and rank; high officials and the beggar alike — all snored in the same language"
  • FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    Without my reading glasses, I saw "plump bosoms". :D
  • Jeremy1012Jeremy1012 Posts: 7,170
    FinsburyParkCarrots wrote:
    Without my reading glasses, I saw "plump bosoms". :D
    that could work... :D

    I swear, every comment you make on my posts in the poetry board are about breasts :p
    "I remember one night at Muzdalifa with nothing but the sky overhead, I lay awake amid sleeping Muslim brothers and I learned that pilgrims from every land — every colour, and class, and rank; high officials and the beggar alike — all snored in the same language"
  • FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    It's the poetic nature of those rising hills that does it.
  • Dylan StoneDylan Stone Posts: 1,145
    I like it...the imagery....the beauty...and I found it thought prevoking....

    So....I say...Do it again! :)
  • Jeremy1012Jeremy1012 Posts: 7,170
    GTFLYGIRL wrote:
    I like it...the imagery....the beauty...and I found it thought prevoking....

    So....I say...Do it again! :)
    Thanks :) I will then. and, y'know, to give Fins his dose of breast imagery... :rolleyes:
    "I remember one night at Muzdalifa with nothing but the sky overhead, I lay awake amid sleeping Muslim brothers and I learned that pilgrims from every land — every colour, and class, and rank; high officials and the beggar alike — all snored in the same language"
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