Of morality

Jeremy1012Jeremy1012 Posts: 7,170
edited February 2007 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Is it for meditation or easing of conscience
That I reflect here of man’s ills?
I cannot, in my darkest hour,
Relate one tenth that I should
And so, by force of pride, folly
Or misguided naivety, I attempt my
Shot at redeeming myself, in tracts
Of youthful morality by way of recompense.
Is it for I or others that I
Beat out this ancient tribal song of
Peace and naked, shallow, spirituality that
Makes me cold with embarrassment
And shake with paralysing guilt?

Is it for these children of our sins,
The battered and broken remnants
Of our debased societies, lying,
Awake, in our urban cesspits under a thousand stars?
Is it for the countless spawn of death
And war, bred in hell-holes of murder, genocide and slavery,
Consigned to a life that constantly
Beats them down with iron fists and
Holds them forever in chains?
Is it for the urchins, junkies, winos and whores,
Ravaged by living a life that presents
Only one single constant –
That it forever fucks them and takes
A sick pleasure in the act,
Living dead, teeth rotting out their heads,
Too tired to beg and too hungry to sleep,
Staring out life in a fight that only
Ends when the perverse, sweet kiss of passing
Touches their cold and cracking lips.

Or is it for me that I write my poem?
A kind of “get out of jail free card”
To ease my guilt, my feeling of
Constant and overbearing impotence.
I am aware, and I am happy.
Does that make me a bad person?
"I remember one night at Muzdalifa with nothing but the sky overhead, I lay awake amid sleeping Muslim brothers and I learned that pilgrims from every land — every colour, and class, and rank; high officials and the beggar alike — all snored in the same language"
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  • FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    Bump.
  • Jeremy1012Jeremy1012 Posts: 7,170
    Bump.
    :D wow, might just be the first time I've been bumped on this board.
    "I remember one night at Muzdalifa with nothing but the sky overhead, I lay awake amid sleeping Muslim brothers and I learned that pilgrims from every land — every colour, and class, and rank; high officials and the beggar alike — all snored in the same language"
  • "That it forever fucks them and takes
    A sick pleasure in the act,
    Living dead, teeth rotting out their heads,
    Too tired to beg and too hungry to sleep,
    Staring out life in a fight that only
    Ends when the perverse, sweet kiss of passing
    Touches their cold and cracking lips."

    This section can be summed up in three words:

    Brilliant. Raw. Powerful.

    Keep 'em comin'!
    I'll cut you in.
  • Jeremy1012Jeremy1012 Posts: 7,170
    "That it forever fucks them and takes
    A sick pleasure in the act,
    Living dead, teeth rotting out their heads,
    Too tired to beg and too hungry to sleep,
    Staring out life in a fight that only
    Ends when the perverse, sweet kiss of passing
    Touches their cold and cracking lips."

    This section can be summed up in three words:

    Brilliant. Raw. Powerful.

    Keep 'em comin'!
    well thanks a lot :) I have some more that I've posted here that you might not have seen. I'll post a couple

    To the worms

    I feel sick,
    and not a little tired.
    One hundred years
    'til I find my cure.
    Yearning to make that connection
    to the sullen, divine blanket
    of night.
    We drift, directionless,
    under luminous sky,
    like Mohammedan angels,
    heavenly but not unselfish,
    dreaming of a reason - a raison d'etre,
    perhaps a muse to focus my attention
    so that the cut is painless.
    Sedation breeds rebirth in death...
    or at least I pray that it is so.

    untitled

    What is this?
    This intangible presence that sticks in my throat
    like a morning fix,
    passive, cold, an exercise in total sterility?
    It doesn't bother me as such
    (or should I say, it doesn't harm me?)
    but it makes me uneasy.
    It's not the unknown that unsettles me,
    for I really know very little,
    but the ever present sense
    that my feeling (for want of a name)
    is just along for the ride.
    I'd love to think there is some profound meaning
    but experience has taught me otherwise.
    It may just be me chastising myself for
    recent self-abuse and over-analysing.
    I am prone to over-analysing...
    Perhaps I should just go along for the ride.
    God knows, I haven't been anywhere nice recently,
    it's damp, cold and the fog makes my hair frizzy,
    I'm irritable, cynical and my sense of humour is becoming very dark.
    I'd tell you a joke but I'm tired and really
    have no interest in tickling that particular bone.
    Needless to say, you wouldn't laugh anyway.
    You'd probably smile politely and turn,
    back to your instant coffee in your
    cardboard cup, safe in the knowledge
    that you are happy with your lot and that,
    no matter what life decides to throw in your face,
    you can be sure as fuck that things can only get better.
    And I? I'll return to my little plate of self-indulgence
    and my "feeling". It doesn't bother me anyway.
    It doesn't harm me.
    "I remember one night at Muzdalifa with nothing but the sky overhead, I lay awake amid sleeping Muslim brothers and I learned that pilgrims from every land — every colour, and class, and rank; high officials and the beggar alike — all snored in the same language"
  • Damn fine stuff. Keep it up.
    "this one, anytime I say love if you wanna say love, uh, say it, and if you say it you might as well say it loud, and if you don't feel like sayin' it, don't say it, but if you feel it, certainly say it..."

    NOTE: Everything I write in the P,P&M section are intended to be songs, not poetry.
  • Jeremy1012Jeremy1012 Posts: 7,170
    Perceptual wrote:
    Damn fine stuff. Keep it up.
    thanks a lot :D
    "I remember one night at Muzdalifa with nothing but the sky overhead, I lay awake amid sleeping Muslim brothers and I learned that pilgrims from every land — every colour, and class, and rank; high officials and the beggar alike — all snored in the same language"
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