Feels Like Errosion (aged into decay)

reeferchiefreeferchief Posts: 3,569
edited August 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Rusty, my chains are erroding fast, like this life will never last
colours fading, no longer shiny like the past
this my future, shriviling up and coming to a stop
this is all that I have amounted to
rusting in a small hole
coming to an end
darkness closing in

The rusted nail is crumbling
day after day
less and less
is left until
nothing is left to stay
Can not be arsed with life no more.
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Comments

  • let it sit in coke for 24 hours
    and the rust will be gone
    and you will RISE UP
    and sing a soulful song
    If that don't work
    take a toke of that beer or bong
    and let your mind
    dream of a better time
    Create Good Things........
    Graduate of the School for Sexual Gifted....magna cum loads
  • reeferchiefreeferchief Posts: 3,569
    Ha ha, thanks but it's not about me personally or anything it's part of a concept I was working on under the title of The Social Side of Loneliness, this would be how it would finish.
    I've put a few poem's/lyrics up recently that would be a part of it just need to get a better feel of the guitar before I can put music to them.:)
    Can not be arsed with life no more.
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