Special To Me

reeferchiefreeferchief Posts: 3,569
edited October 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
in a society most degrading, i find it's almost impossible, to express how i feel about you, your nothing short of amazing, and i think its strange to say things, hard to describe what i wanted to

you're the clock that keeps me ticking, you're the tree that keeps me breathing, in a world thats so deciving, you're the constant, positive feeling, i keep beliving, i keep beliving

in a blank faceless world, full of criminals preaching democracy, they dont know the meaning, its sad to see, so many hypocrites, so full of shit, but then i see you're face smile at me............. and all the hopeless are forgetten, left there rotting they are unimportant, in this special moment

you're the apple in my eden, you're the truth, the rhyme, the reason, i know you'd never be deciving, you're the one good feeling i'll belive in, my constant positive feeling, my constant positive feeling
Can not be arsed with life no more.
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  • justamjustam Posts: 21,412
    I'm sure whoever you wrote this for would like it! :)
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  • jamjamjamjam Posts: 491
    yes, good vibes coming from this piece :)
  • Very Good! I wonder who that was for?
    Can't you see that there's light in the dark.
    Nothing's quite what it seems in the city of dreams.
    (Wolfmother)
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~
    Grand Rapids 2006
  • reeferchiefreeferchief Posts: 3,569
    Very Good! I wonder who that was for?

    Thanks:) it was about and for my son, Kurt.
    Can not be arsed with life no more.
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    Thanks:) it was about and for my son, Kurt.



    i thought as much. and this is what told me so. :)

    you're the apple in my eden, you're the truth, the rhyme, the reason, i know you'd never be deciving, you're the one good feeling i'll belive in, my constant positive feeling, my constant positive feeling
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
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