Home› Poetry, Prose, Music & Art

Nature's Way

reeferchiefreeferchief Posts: 3,569
edited May 2007 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
What are we all gonna do?
when the world comes tumbling
and all the mountains start crumbling
where will we run to?
In what shadows will we hide?
What will we do?
when the oceans swell
and the tsunami crashes on the high tide
where will we run to?
no hills left for us to climb
It's all gonna catch us in the end
we are all gonna pay for what we made
this planet controls us
not some myth in the sky
time to stop daydreaming
and live our lives right
Can not be arsed with life no more.
Post edited by Unknown User on

Comments

  • peepspeeps Posts: 79
    i like it, but the word tsunami sort of fucks up the whole flow. the pronunciation i mean.
  • reeferchiefreeferchief Posts: 3,569
    peeps wrote:
    i like it, but the word tsunami sort of fucks up the whole flow. the pronunciation i mean.

    Yeah maybe "tidal wave" would have fit better.:)
    Can not be arsed with life no more.
  • reeferchiefreeferchief Posts: 3,569
    reeferchief wrote:
    Yeah maybe "tidal wave" would have fit better.:)

    "Tidal wave crashes on the shore" even.
    See when I write on here it generally is a work in progress.;)
    Can not be arsed with life no more.
  • peepspeeps Posts: 79
    i think it's the "ts" that throws everything off. Tidal wave works much better.
  • FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    Tidal wave sounds better in this context.

    However, the t in tsunami is silent, so it's not too cumbersome to say.
  • peepspeeps Posts: 79
    FinsburyParkCarrots wrote:
    However, the t in tsunami is silent

    goddamn brits :D
  • reeferchiefreeferchief Posts: 3,569
    peeps wrote:
    goddamn brits :D

    Lol we made it, now we dictate it.:D T'is cool, I prefer the tidal wave now I've thought it through when I typed it was more free flow and tsunami was what came to mind.:)
    Can not be arsed with life no more.
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    yeah you may have made it and dictate it, but tsunami's not an english word.

    brits still think they rule the empire. :p:D
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • reeferchiefreeferchief Posts: 3,569
    catefrances wrote:
    yeah you may have made it and dictate it, but tsunami's not an english word.

    brits still think they rule the empire. :p:D

    shut up slave.;):o:D
    Can not be arsed with life no more.
  • FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    They do. I'm Irish, though. :p
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    reeferchief wrote:
    shut up slave.;):o:D


    slave? now there's that british pomposity we all love. :p:D
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    FinsburyParkCarrots wrote:
    They do. I'm Irish, though. :p

    and that is why my comment was directed at reefer. :D
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • reeferchiefreeferchief Posts: 3,569
    catefrances wrote:
    slave? now there's that british pomposity we all love. :p:D

    Damn if only my family had been set free all those years ago.:)
    you know I was jus' kidding.:)
    Can not be arsed with life no more.
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    reeferchief wrote:
    Damn if only my family had been set free all those years ago.:)
    you know I was jus' kidding.:)

    oh i don't know reefer, sometimes i quite enjoy being told what to do by a master. :p:D
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • reeferchiefreeferchief Posts: 3,569
    catefrances wrote:
    oh i don't know reefer, sometimes i quite enjoy being told what to do by a master. :p:D

    I bet, and yeah submissive is my middle name too.;)
    Can not be arsed with life no more.
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    reeferchief wrote:
    I bet, and yeah submissive is my middle name too.;)



    yeah, i already knew that. :D:p;)
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • reeferchiefreeferchief Posts: 3,569
    Transparent as well, shit me cover is blown.:)
    Can not be arsed with life no more.
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    reeferchief wrote:
    Transparent as well, shit me cover is blown.:)

    oh yeah cause you're so good at covering yourself when i'm around. :rolleyes: :D:p
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
Sign In or Register to comment.