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Empty End

reeferchiefreeferchief Posts: 3,569
edited July 2008 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
All I came to bare
new scars fresh to wear
collected from my journey
from all that disowned me
Can not be arsed with life no more.
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  • BuruBuru Posts: 8,473
    This seems more like the end of a poem. And quite final at that.
    In my mind, or in my reading, It's almost begging for a few more stanzas leading to this final one, which I quite enjoyed.
    y la banda de Guille... cuando toca?
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