Temptation

reeferchief
reeferchief Posts: 3,569
edited October 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Feed my pain, shower me with suffering
through all your atempts and trying, I will rise the same
your just a passing phase, another fashion I'll erase
from my memorys, you'll be gone and I'll not change

I'll still be in this place, but do I want to be?
my passion it rises like flames, but not for the right people
I seem to have fell from my steeple, but have strings attached
which keep me dangling, now I cant relax

These feeling they now heighten, sexual tensions exploding
erupting in my brain, can I show restraint? can I refrain?
this energy's enticing me, it's pulling me towards you like metal to a magnet
all these emotions forbidden, but escaping, cant control, nor explain

Monogamous thoughts being invade by demons, driving me insane
whenever your near me, always the same
wanting you to free me, escape my contract
Utilise you as a get out clause, reach freedoms charms again.
Can not be arsed with life no more.
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  • stoneygali
    stoneygali Posts: 148
    can i tell you that this is so beautiful. mind if i save it for my BAD days?
    I never meant to hurt you, mi diablo, mi amigo, but I've built up so much character I have an alter ego. I have to make a clean break & I have to do it quick because the pain you give me babe would make Cal Ripken call in sick!!!
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    perhaps sometimes we try too hard to explain things that can't be explained.

    nice work :)
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • reeferchief
    reeferchief Posts: 3,569
    stoneygali wrote:
    can i tell you that this is so beautiful. mind if i save it for my BAD days?

    You can have it for whenever you want, thanks.:)
    Can not be arsed with life no more.
  • Ms. Haiku
    Ms. Haiku Washington DC Posts: 7,389
    This poem makes me wonder what the before and after look like i.e., monogamy versus adultery.
    There is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
    The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird

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