Moving On

reeferchief
reeferchief Posts: 3,569
edited November 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
It shattered, breaking like a window in my mind
this feeling suddenley lost, thanks to you're actions
like a house being hit by a bomb, all crumpled into rubble
so much to take in, in the emptiness that's left
everyone said you would be trouble, but I was blind to it
these memory's, like pieces of what was once there
haunting, aggravating, taunting my mental state
everything's ruined and I cant calculate
whats going to happen in the future,
before it all seemed so concrete, set in stone
the road was already paved and the signposts all in place
now demolished, I feel fragile and unsafe.

You betrayed my heart, for something quick on the side
A little extra, thought you would be able to hide
but babe it's such a small town and secrets they subside
everyone finds out everything eventually
you should of realised this by now,
after all you grew up here too, dont you see they're all so snide
bitter and twisted, cant wait to see you fail
to make themselves feel better,
small town people with small town minds
Now were finished, I'm gonna leave it all behind.
Can not be arsed with life no more.
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  • NothinGBetteRPJMaN
    NothinGBetteRPJMaN Posts: 530
    I love this.....especially the final two lines. Alot of this is really is hitting home with me right now. Much more complex and well written than what I am writing right now.
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  • depopulationINC
    depopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    reeferchief wrote:
    It shattered, breaking like a window in my mind
    this feeling suddenley lost, thanks to you're actions
    like a house being hit by a bomb, all crumpled into rubble
    so much to take in, in the emptiness that's left
    everyone said you would be trouble, but I was blind to it
    these memory's, like pieces of what was once there
    haunting, aggravating, taunting my mental state
    everything's ruined and I cant calculate
    whats going to happen in the future,
    before it all seemed so concrete, set in stone
    the road was already paved and the signposts all in place
    now demolished, I feel fragile and unsafe.

    You betrayed my heart, for something quick on the side
    A little extra, thought you would be able to hide
    but babe it's such a small town and secrets they subside
    everyone finds out everything eventually
    you should of realised this by now,
    after all you grew up here too, dont you see they're all so snide
    bitter and twisted, cant wait to see you fail
    to make themselves feel better,
    small town people with small town minds
    Now were finished, I'm gonna leave it all behind.


    emotionally written...excellent
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • moreandmore
    moreandmore Posts: 164
    i like the cadence in the first stanza

    be well, reeferchief

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