Life Takes

reeferchiefreeferchief Posts: 3,569
edited April 2007 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Give me all you're energy
and all the love you've got
I'm sucking up you're empathy
and draining all you are.
Can not be arsed with life no more.
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  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    seems like there's more to come out with this one reefer. :)
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • reeferchiefreeferchief Posts: 3,569
    nah that was all, short and unsweetened
    Can not be arsed with life no more.
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    you know me reefer, i can always feel something more. :p
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • reeferchiefreeferchief Posts: 3,569
    you know me reefer, i can always feel something more. :p

    now, now, lets not lower the tone.:)
    Can not be arsed with life no more.
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    oh please. i was talking writing and you know it. :D
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • chadwickchadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    Give me all you're energy
    and all the love you've got
    I'm sucking up you're empathy
    and draining all you are.

    nicely done.
    i like it.
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."

    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
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