A Journey Together

reeferchiefreeferchief Posts: 3,569
edited January 2007 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
I'm floating through this vortex,
A goal I'm yet to find
A purpose in my pressence
no essence in my smile
could I be a,
creedence in you're virtue
a sparkle in you're desire
a twinkle in you're eye now
a part of me is inside you
together were entwined
forever now we will be
even if not at our best you see
the magic has worked it's spells
the potions have been cast
our history is gonna make this last
together on our driftwood,
floating on our raft
in our spot of ocean
all that was important past
whats important is now
and we are here at last
together never to be divided
together never to be apart
all that I ever deamed of
all within my heart
you were all I'm asking for
please may I play my part?
Can not be arsed with life no more.
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Comments

  • JamalJamal Posts: 2,115
    "no essence in my smile"

    wow, especially this one line drew my attention
    Damn !!

    I like the whole thing, man.
    Surf little waves big... Charge big waves hard

    - Antwerp '06, Nijmegen '07, Werchter '07
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,412
    I like this one too. :)
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