Addiction

reeferchiefreeferchief Posts: 3,569
edited January 2007 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
It's all these conflicting scenes
messing up my mind
muddling the dream
creating this confusion
so many feeligns came unseen
this heartbreak no one needs
this tension we all feel
emptiness is stomach churning
I need you here with me
but you're all set for leaving
and I cant change you're mind
baby, I dont want to be left grieving
trying to pick up all these pieces
that I cant even find
dont go fucking, leave me
your all I seem to need
addiction is a nightmare
and you're the cloud
that shrouds my dream.
Can not be arsed with life no more.
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  • justamjustam Posts: 21,412
    I hope she doesn't leave since you want her to stay. :(
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  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    and you're the cloud
    that shrouds my dream.

    shit reefer. this sounds like a line i would have written. not surprisingly i like it. :D
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • Good Stuff.

    Shitty subject but hopefully writing will help you release some stress and make it easier to get through it.
    "Don't lose your inner heat...ever" - EV 5/13/06
  • reeferchiefreeferchief Posts: 3,569
    Good Stuff.

    Shitty subject but hopefully writing will help you release some stress and make it easier to get through it.

    It's ok mate I'm not addicted to drugs, or gambling or anything serious like that.:)
    Can not be arsed with life no more.
  • JamalJamal Posts: 2,115
    It's ok mate I'm not addicted to drugs, or gambling or anything serious like that.:)
    I believe we all even share a serious addiction to good music, no? :)
    Like the poem btw :D
    Surf little waves big... Charge big waves hard

    - Antwerp '06, Nijmegen '07, Werchter '07
  • reeferchiefreeferchief Posts: 3,569
    Jamal wrote:
    I believe we all even share a serious addiction to good music, no? :)
    Like the poem btw :D

    To right mate music is my biggest addiction of all.:)
    Can not be arsed with life no more.
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    why would you think we would necessarily think the addiction was drug related? that's not what my first thought was.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • reeferchiefreeferchief Posts: 3,569
    why would you think we would necessarily think the addiction was drug related? that's not what my first thought was.

    Perception is a curious creature.
    Can not be arsed with life no more.
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    Perception is a curious creature.

    indeed it is. certainly the basis for miscommunication.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
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