Working Through the Rubble, to Piece Together the Future

reeferchiefreeferchief Posts: 3,569
edited March 2007 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
All of my ideas
through all your advice
empty spaces, feeling nice
needing my time
to figure things out
felt like my head was on a block
and it was ready to be chopped

off

take some time to appreciate
take some time to get away
from all of those negatives in us
need to ween them out
so we can carry on today

and it was all my fault
so you said
nothing could ever be right
inside your head
everything was me
I took all the blame
all the pieces of the puzzle
lay beneath my

feet

walking away for a while
walking away maybe again we'll smile
remember the positives we shared
need to work them out
so we can carry on today

I think it was both of us to blame
neither one could be the bigger person
and make it work again
I think the problem was
we were both too proud to back

down

and listen to what we both needed to say
and listen to what each of us needed to hear
got to pay attention to each other
so we can carry on today
Can not be arsed with life no more.
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Comments

  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    i like this one. :)
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • reeferchiefreeferchief Posts: 3,569
    i like this one. :)

    Thank you, I have a nice piece of music fitted to this in my head, I just need the instruments to work it all together properly.:)
    Can not be arsed with life no more.
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