Living With You're Head in a Daydream

reeferchiefreeferchief Posts: 3,569
edited March 2007 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
She thought she understood him
she thought he knew
she thought that he would love her
until the bitter end
capsized in her own arrogance
she wandered on in her dream
ignorant to realitys violence
to him she was just convenience
a shelter above his head
and he was jealous of her possesions
although she tried to share them with him
he wanted it all for himself
for her to go away
and from the very beginning
she was blind to it all
his snide sarcastic remarks
his viscious personality
his traits just like a wounded wolf
let you heal him then attack
she was told but would'nt listen
many times and time again
she thought she had perfection
but what she had was a disguised hell
when he hit her,
she thought she deserved it
that she'd done a wrong to him
she did'nt ever realise
he was just a worthless piece of shit.
Can not be arsed with life no more.
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  • chadwickchadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    ding ding ding goes the bell thingy..this frickin rocks..a flowing well written lil
    story like..the ending, i so love it..and yes he is a piece of shit..you rock..
    thanks for puttin it up for us to check out..
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."

    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    sometimes we have to come to our own conclusions.

    good one reefer. :)
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
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