Yeah

reeferchiefreeferchief Posts: 3,569
edited April 2007 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
This shit's got me goin crazy
this shit got me going crazy
this shit's fucking me inside
I dont know what to do

this devil hides
I am a man
at least I think
I think I am
I am a man
I hope, I swear
I am a man

I dont know what to do
you're fucking me up now
you're ruining my whole life
I'm devestated
and i'm in denial
am I a man
I ask you now?

once was a time
was a little time
when you did'nt have a clue

I'd fight with the boys
fight with who a could
to prove just who I was

but that boy died
that boy died
died along time ago

I am me
I'm who I am
watcha gonna do
fuck you too
that boy died

and I'm a blessing to you all

it sounds religious
it sounds contrived
it sounds pompous like an arsehole

but this is my story, this is my rhyme
and if you dont like, well thats cool
coz I am yours and I am mine
and thats all there is to it
Can not be arsed with life no more.
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Comments

  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    i like this one reefer. :)
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • BrainofdzBrainofdz Posts: 1,617
    I like it dude
    "Stunned by my own reflection, It's looking back, sees me too clearly and I swore I'd never go there again, Not unlike a friend that politely drags you down,down,down"

    When you see me on the street, yell out "FAVO!!!"

    I've been to alot of Pearl Jam shows;So fucking what.
  • chadwickchadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    i like it as well..kick ass
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."

    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • reeferchiefreeferchief Posts: 3,569
    Remind me not to write when I'm drunk.:)
    Can not be arsed with life no more.
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    Remind me not to write when I'm drunk.:)

    hah! fat chance. you know i can't condone writing sober all the time. :)
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • reeferchiefreeferchief Posts: 3,569
    hah! fat chance. you know i can't condone writing sober all the time. :)

    It just makes no sense to me now I'm sober lol, I've worked all easter weekend apart from last night so I got pissed, lol.:)
    Can not be arsed with life no more.
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