As I Lay Dying

reeferchiefreeferchief Posts: 3,569
edited April 2008 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
In peace we find tragedy
In death we find new birth
we twist everything that happens
for better or for worse
you didn't see me bleeding
but my heart was pouring out
and now I'm here clasping my last breath
screaming these words out

I feel so insignificant
to your needs and your life
your so much more important
and I'm just a speck in the corner of your eye


TBC
Can not be arsed with life no more.
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  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    ah fuck reefer....... :( im holding a knife on my hand(metaphorically speaking of course) and i make the mistake of reading that.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • prismprism Posts: 2,440
    :(
    *~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
    angels share laughter
    *~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
  • reeferchiefreeferchief Posts: 3,569
    In peace we find tragedy
    In death we find new birth
    we twist everything that happens
    for better or for worse
    you didn't see me bleeding
    but my heart was pouring out
    and now I'm here clasping my last breath
    screaming these words out

    I feel so insignificant
    to your needs and your life
    your so much more important
    and I'm just a speck in the corner of your eye
    we know what this lifes about
    but I'll call it a lie
    because now your not here anymore
    I've no more reasons why

    as my world starts to blackout,
    I feel my tide coming in
    I look around for you to be
    but your only within
    you were gone so long ago
    and I was left for dead
    wishing, praying, regreting
    any words I said
    that made you want to leave me
    that made you go away

    Is it really all my fault?
    or maybe I was naive
    to fall for your charms
    your heartless kiss of death
    and as I lay here dying
    I cry out your name ((one last time))
    but all I hear back is an echo
    with an image of you in my mind.
    Can not be arsed with life no more.
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    In peace we find tragedy
    In death we find new birth
    we twist everything that happens
    for better or for worse
    you didn't see me bleeding
    but my heart was pouring out
    and now I'm here clasping my last breath
    screaming these words out

    I feel so insignificant
    to your needs and your life
    your so much more important
    and I'm just a speck in the corner of your eye
    we know what this lifes about
    but I'll call it a lie
    because now your not here anymore
    I've no more reasons why

    as my world starts to blackout,
    I feel my tide coming in
    I look around for you to be
    but your only within
    you were gone so long ago
    and I was left for dead
    wishing, praying, regreting
    any words I said
    that made you want to leave me
    that made you go away

    Is it really all my fault?
    or maybe I was naive
    to fall for your charms
    your heartless kiss of death
    and as I lay here dying
    I cry out your name ((one last time))
    but all I hear back is an echo
    with an image of you in my mind.

    OMG reefer. this is some seriously good wordage my friend. :)

    this espec.,

    you didn't see me bleeding
    but my heart was pouring out
    and now I'm here clasping my last breath
    screaming these words out
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    this bit too:

    and as I lay here dying
    I cry out your name ((one last time))
    but all I hear back is an echo
    with an image of you in my mind.


    :)
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
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