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Holding On To

reeferchiefreeferchief Posts: 3,569
edited July 2007 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Bringing me closer to you
this feeling, traversing our divide
confide in me and my heart is with you
my eternal depression bride
together we roam this valley
disspair to where? only our mind's
at least in you I have something
if only the problems of mine.
Can not be arsed with life no more.
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  • reeferchiefreeferchief Posts: 3,569
    reeferchief wrote:
    Bringing me closer to you
    this feeling, traversing our divide
    confide in me and my heart is with you
    my eternal depression bride
    together we roam this valley
    disspair to where? only our mind's
    at least in you I have something
    if only these problems of mine.

    Edit Edit Edit.:eek:
    Can not be arsed with life no more.
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    you know reefer, this is one of those poems of yours that gets me thinking. :)
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • reeferchiefreeferchief Posts: 3,569
    catefrances wrote:
    you know reefer, this is one of those poems of yours that gets me thinking. :)

    That's cool, just a short one, I did'nt want to dilute it any further, I thought those eight lines were enough.:)
    Can not be arsed with life no more.
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    reeferchief wrote:
    That's cool, just a short one, I did'nt want to dilute it any further, I thought those eight lines were enough.:)

    good call. eight was enough. :)
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    catefrances wrote:
    good call. eight was enough. :)

    yes, well done indeed!
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
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